Near Matches
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2
The Kim Li Diaries: Chapter One
(
fiction
)
by
dannye
Fri Dec 01 2000 at 3:54:07
Deck had just leaned back in his malfunctioning
rocker
and tilted the last golden drops of the
JTS Brown
from the glass. A glass he took from the motel the night before. What was that girl's name? It sounded like
Mona
, or was that just 'cause of the noises he had her making around 2 AM? Ah, who cares, he thought.
Just another brick in the wall
, or a notch on the bedpost, or
whatever
.
There'd been so many Mona's and
Jessica
's and
Deborah
's that he couldn't even remember the smell of one broad from another.
The sign on the door said,
"C. Deckard Coffield - Private Dick."
He liked to be known as "Deck," but there was always some
smartass
that wanted to fish out his first given name ("Carrie") and start up with the
girl shit
. He'd about had it up to his
prostate
gland with that crap, but it always came out at the worst time. He'd thought about changing the "C" to something else, but his mom was still alive and he figured he'd wait 'til she took the
dirt nap
to mess with it.
The sun was filtering in at a low angle through the
venetian blinds
, and he was about to light up another unfiltered
Lucky Strike
, when he saw the shadow of some feet under his office door. He stayed real still, worried that it might be Mona (or whatever her name was) come looking for her
VISA
card. But when he heard a man's knock at the door, he said, "C'mon in; it's open."
A thin Oriental guy walked in, peering around as if he was afraid a
Cobra
was going to bite him. He looked young, but then again Deck could never tell age with Orientals. With
WASP
s you could usually tell by the hands, Deck mused, but not with the
yellow peril
.
Deck said, "C'mon, c'mon, man. The chair's right here. Sit your ass down and tell me what's
up
it?"
Back
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Forward
The Kim Li Diaries: Chapter Two
The Kim Li Diaries
Wasp
I am Holden Caulfield
Yellow peril
Noding for Numbers
Two Gentlemen On Veronica : Act I, Scene ii
E2 is unfriendly to new noders
The Kim Li Diaries: Chapter Ten
Survivor2: Week 6
All in all, you're just another brick in the wall
Prostate
Everything2 in the Pages of Cool
The Diary of Anne Frank
Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon
We've Replaced Your Freedom with the Illusion of Freedom
Holden Caulfield
iDEATH
Weetzie Bat
Prostatitis
Carbonate
Independence Day
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